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Post by Alice on Jul 26, 2010 4:48:45 GMT 2
...because it's not choppy and split up...it's choppy...okay ^~^ Whatever you say
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Post by The Shadow of Death on Jul 26, 2010 5:00:26 GMT 2
it doesnt flow like a paragraph should, thats part of the reason it was split.
read it the way you formatted it.
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Post by Alice on Jul 26, 2010 6:58:46 GMT 2
It's less choppy and better organized than it was. But if you don't like it, by all means, change it however you want.
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Post by The Shadow of Death on Jul 26, 2010 7:05:23 GMT 2
i will have to reword some of it, but not tonight.
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Post by The Shadow of Death on Aug 2, 2010 6:38:03 GMT 2
there... i think i fixed it...
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Post by Alice on Aug 10, 2010 7:11:17 GMT 2
Then I can safely rate it in my twenty or so minutes of free time ^~^ 6/10; much higher than before, I believe ^~^
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Post by The Shadow of Death on Aug 11, 2010 5:50:46 GMT 2
see, now it sounds right when read! and i notticed you kinda disappeared.
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Post by Alice on Aug 11, 2010 8:12:19 GMT 2
...Actually...it sounds the same when read. But meh. Not like it really matters.
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Post by The Shadow of Death on Aug 11, 2010 19:31:12 GMT 2
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Post by Alice on Aug 13, 2010 9:28:44 GMT 2
My point was that we've spent so much time arguing, this thread is no longer valid. Back to rating signatures ^~^
7/10
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